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Raw NerVZ Haiku Vol.IX #2

Canada has long been a great haiku nation and RAW NERVZ is testament to a continued spirit of adventure and exploration. Its densely packed pages contain a rich seam for prospectors on the frontier of haiku — some solid gold nuggets, plenty of beautiful, glittering pyrites and, it must be admitted, a quantity of mud (one or two of these contributions seem too self-consciously literary).

Among the rewards, the rueful humour of Tim Bravenboer:

	late for meeting
	last seat
	by the boss
John J. Dunphy's sequence HANDWORK:
	young Goth
	a skull painted
	on each fingernail
Richard Parks' translations of Céline Fortin:
	and a second time
	the far-wailing of night trains
	wakes me to sadness
and Marlene Mountain, queen of the one-liner:
	passing shower hangs around longer than its intent
Aside from the poetry, RAW NERVZ is really distinguished by its graphics. It positively brims with brush paintings, photos, found images, collage, calligraphy and other typographical extravaganzas. Not to mention a bright green rubber stamped frog. This might have resulted in a hideous mess, but these images have great strength and simplicity. Claudia R. Coutu's Zen-like drawings are particularly appealing. The graphics are the visual expression of a truly vivacious and energetic publication.

reviewer: Ian Sherred.
Raw NerVZ Haiku Vol.IX #4

A magazine of haiku, senryu and tanka. A poet is often given space for three or more examples of his/her work, and an interesting element is the occasional piece where prose is used to set the scene/time that led to the haiku, or even just to stand in contrast to it, although sometimes the evocation of a particular scene/memory in prose is more effective than the few words of the poem.

Haiku, because of the distilled paucity of its expression and reliance on what is evoked rather than stated, is perhaps even more of a random hit or miss affair than other types of poetry. Although, as expected, there are a few misses here, there are nonetheless quite a number of hits. I pick out as examples the following by Chad Lee Robinson, Mykel Board and Daniel Py:

	with my sweater
	she returns
	the shape of her breasts

		from under the bamboo
		I watch the rain fall
		on someone else

	ma soeur habitait un ruisseau
	sur un fil d'ombre
	le soleil dansait
There is other fine work by Patricia Prime, Gerald England, H.F. Noyes, David Elliott, Patricia Stalker and D. Claire Gallagher. There is an at times bewildering profusion of forms and shapes of pieces here, with an eclectic mass of viewpoints, styles and states of mind. The layout is original and striking, reflecting the abundance of material of all shapes and sizes, with a fair bit of interesting artwork.

A magazine that is cleverly put together and has the feel and look of having been in its composition a work of love and devotion.

reviewer: Alan Hardy.
Raw NerVZ Haiku Vol.X #1

This is an A5 stapled booklet containing 52 pages. The pages contain a variety of short poetry. It also contains haibun. It is diverse enough to please a wide range of readers, but the journal retains its focus. I recognise the names of many contributors, probably because the poets able to write respectable haiku and tanka are few.

The topics are varied and Patricia Prime provides a mystery:

	spring thunderstorm
	the unexplained noise
	in a rented room
Other topics range from shells to birds:
	my raincoat —
	in the pocket
	last summer's shells

		dawn sky
		the space the clouds make
		for departing birds
The former was by Andrew Detheridge and the latter by Jeff Witkin. I particularly like the following by Bruce Ross:
	snowstorm . . .
	without knocking off anything
	bush chickadee
It is a warm and very pleasant little journal, containing some worthy work. To show the range of forms I give below a couple more pieces. The first is a very nifty one-liner by John Stevenson, and the second is a tanka by Pamela Miller Ness:
	passing my old girlfriend's house no seats on the train

		Like Gaughin's 
		violet lover
		palm open
		I offer this
		raw heart.

reviewer: Doreen King.