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River King Poetry Supplement Vol. VII #I

Packed into this 4-page newspaper style supplement, part funded by the Illinois Arts Council, are 48 contemporary, quality poems on a wide variety of themes. Most contributors are American but the British poet Helen Buckingham is represented by three poems and other international contributors include Giovanni Malito, a chemistry lecturer in Cork and the Australian poet John Grey.

I like BETWEEN by Ron Offen for its language and images:

	In the cold cellar of December,
	where we store the apples of summer
	and the last of autumn's leavings,
	the sun is like a memory of smoke...
The descriptions in TOILET by Paul Grant, another well constructed poem that looks back to a past event, are also impressive:
	Privy to non-sense already, I'm ready
	when a willow-twist of wind lifts me onto the porch
	of a shotgun house and blows both doors ajar
	so I can see the abandoned outhouse back
	by the chinaberry tree.
Another is SURVIVAL by C.S.Fuqua a poem with impact that compares the survival instinct of sparrows and hawks with car drivers:
	A horn sounds,
	the sparrows break away,
	the hawk glides into blue to fill his belly,
	and cars and trucks move beyond the light,
	their drivers headed home
	to plates of warm chicken.
Many other poems are worth reading: G7 LEADERS WARN VLADIMIR PUTIN, for example, by Kevin Higgins, who has published poetry in Ireland. This contains wry comment on political institutions in general:
	The trick is to keep the syringe hidden.
	If you flash it, like a dagger, in front of the cameras,
	The children will disbelieve spin-doctors
	Who talk of fairytale democracy. What's worse
	The little bastards won't sleep and the dose
	Will have to be endlessly increased.
Altogether a good read and I like the variety of poems chosen by the editors, who include Sam Smith as British liaison.

reviewer: Ron Woollard.
River King Poetry Supplement Vol. VII #II

RIVER KING, printed like a newspaper, with its contents laid out in columns, seems a splendid way in which to present poetry. I was first introduced to this type of publication in 1998 when I was sent a copy of The Endless Mountain Review (Pennsylvania) - also good.

I was encouraged by the very first poem on the front page — DIRE-POOR-COP, by Coral Hull. Scathing and funny — yes it's the rich what gets the pleasure of slumming it

	I wish I could slum it like the middle class hippies.
	In the big rebellion from rich mummies & daddies.
	But I'm from the working classes, worn
	down in my twenties, it took me twenty years
	to get rid of my base Christianity, my homophobia,
The next poem down in this first column, GREEN (for an anorexic daughter), by Philip Dacey, is a less dramatic treatment of the subject than UK poet Philip Gross' prize winning THE WASTING GAME (also about a daughter). It is, though, in its quiet, even handed way just as moving.

(sixth stanza)
	Hunger is green
	if the hand reaches to feed it.
	Hunger drains to white
	when it sings its siren song.

	I want this poem
	to be an edible green prayer
	we share
	at a table for two.
Blake A Hoena's GROUNDHOG DAY caught my eye on page 3. Again, a poem that says what it wants to say, without verbiage.
	My father paid for his life
	in thirty two instalments.
	First incisors, then canines,
	and finally molars crumbled
	like the Roman empire, leaving
	splintered runs in his mouth.
		He eats
	to fill the cavity in his chest
	where his breath no longer can reach
		but sometimes
	I have to spin him around
	so the light won't wrap
	itself around his back
	and cast a shadow.
The overall quality of the poetry in this 'paper' is outstanding. There is hardly a poem not worth quoting. The splendid and long 'interview' with the poet, Charles Levendosky, is a joy to read.

Poetry for me, is the most essential kind of communication there is. There will always be a need for poetry and for poets — for at our best, we speak to and for the human condition, not just the collective head and/or heart, but to what it means to be human with all our frailties and our dreams.

YES!

reviewer: Michael Bangerter.
River King Poetry Supplement Vol. VIII #I

RIVER KING POETRY SUPPLEMENT is a broadsheet formatted U.S. poetry periodical edited by Wayne Lanter. In this issue the good poems are those by the non-British and Irish contributors. With the British and Irish contributions we see as usual the ongoing fetish with description, a prosaic register and the obsessive desire to introduce into poetry the techniques and tone of prose-fiction. True poetry attempts to provide a lexis which allows for a multiplicity of meanings. The function of prose fiction is the converse of this in that it attempts to limit multiplicity of meaning, so as to better serve the requirements of plot and character development. I will look firstly at the British and Irish poets. In GRAVITY GETS YOU IN THE END by Maureen Gallagher we see a lamenting of the aging process:

	Gravity gets you in the end;
	once you start the slide
	there's no stopping the momentum
This observation has been expressed in poetic terms since the time BEOWULF was written. It is so obviously true that one would have thought that to repeat it again would be superfluous — let alone to devote a whole poem to it. She continues in this vein with:
	I watch you and think,
	twenty years from now
	you will be me, or could be me.
Again we have a trite observation this time made worse by the inclusion of "or could be me" as a parenthetical afterthought. In reality both these excerpts are nothing more than clumsy prose.

In DISINFORMATION by R. G. Bishop we see another lament, this time tinged with indignation, at the explanation the church gives —"he has placed his soul into the hands of God"— for the death of a man:

	Not true! What famous crap God's image
	blathers; he was knocked down
	first by a stroke,
	then left like a lung fish in the spittle of old age
The poem continues to rail at the church for saying "he has placed his soul into the hands of God", and in the concluding stanza states: "It's simply not true! He didn't give up voluntarily". One can almost hear Dylan Thomas turning in his grave.

FINTAN WRIGHT by Noel Conneely is merely about an amateur mechanic who likes to tinker with his Morris Minor:

	Though the garage was a greasy place,
	he seldom dressed in overalls:
	and when he did,
	they were the next best thing to clean.
It continues:
	No better man to listen to
	an engine's anxious bleat
	and before you could say sixpence
	to diagnose the matter
Once again this is nothing other than bad prose. To a more or lesser extent this poem is methodologically representative of much of British and Irish poetic output since the 1950s. It is a methodology that results in a style which is top-heavy in descriptive lucidity at the expense of connotation. It thus leaves nothing for the reader to imagine.

When we come to look at the contributions from the non-British and Irish poet in this periodical we see a marked difference in approach. The emphasis is not as much on the "real" or empirical but rather on the imaginative as in SPACE by Holly Feldman Karapetkova:

	What we still do not know, and what fascinates me,
	is what the light passes through
	as it moves for decades toward our eyes,
	what happens in the distance between the
				vision and the future
and FLARE: MEDITATIONS FOR A LONELY BIRTHDAY by Remi Raji:
	In the end solitude would win
	The farther you seek
	the little you find.
	For the journey must begin
	with a will to swim
	towards that light within
and WASP SWARM by Linda Vianu
	I thought the past could be pursued
	from the point where it shed you
	in the wasp swarm of incidents midway between worlds
	I was wrong
	— I will not join that wasp swarm —
	you were right to be wary
	so many unknown faces during the breaks
	a slammed door
	and the news I still hope for
The above three examples of what I call non-empirical poetry are able to produce in the reader a far more interactive stance than the poems quoted from the British and Irish poets. The use of abstraction and a generalised lexis in the non-British and Irish contributions — "the light passes through"; "the journey must begin"; "during the breaks" — allows for a more collaborative response from the reader who, by engaging with the text as "co-author", is able to personalise what the poem states as a generalisation. And in doing so making the poem more emotionally relevant to his or her individual life experience. In other words the poem, to paraphrase Keats, becomes a wording of the reader's own thoughts. Such is not possible with a poetry that is too eager to represent the real and familiar.

reviewer: Jeffrey Side.
River King Poetry Supplement Vol. VIII #II

This issue consists almost entirely of poems but with a column AL SAYS and an in-depth interview with poet David Ray by J. F. Garmon. In the column AL SAYS, the author states his reason for the choice of poems in this issue:

Assuming that art does influence and aid in the creation of a culture, as it is obvious the oppressor assume, Al is pleased to open the pages of River King to these, and other, 'hard thinking' poets.
David Ray has won many awards for his poetry and fiction, and one of the poems in this issue PREPARING THE MONUMENT, originally appeared in the anthology SEPTEMBER 11, 2001: AMERICAN WRITERS RESPOND:
	They are hard at work on a monument
	while the smoke is still roiling out of the pit,
 
	raising the question of how much effort
	it takes to pound the present into the past
 
	and quickly convert a disaster still in progress
	to the status of an ancient and archaic attraction.
Ray is a persuasive poet, managing to convey in this interview the personal history behind his poetry, his spiritual and political approach towards poetry, the places and people that have influenced him, and his search for freedom, truth and beauty in poetry. Ray speaks of his Quaker background and the meaning its testimony on war and violence has for him. He tells of his vivid dissatisfaction with the "daily assaults on sanity", of the
vulnerability that drives the poet to engage in dialogue with the world even if the world doesn't respond.
He talks about his enthusiasm for the work of Roethke, the loss of his son, and the influence teaching has had on his life. Some of Ray's poems are included in the review. A short poem will give the flavour of his work:
	The friendly face — no
	challenge at all. But you — now
	there's stone worth the work!
 
	e-mail, such closeness —
	but its silence — rejections
	even on Sunday.
Several of the poets in here are known to me from other little literary magazines: Gloria B. Yates is a well-known Australian poet and editor. Her poem HIS NEW WHEELCHAIR encompasses Yates' much appreciated wit:
	since the wheelchair came
	I've not wept
	I'll cry when it goes.
B. Z. Niditch's name is known not only in the USA but here in NZ. FAMILY is a wonderful evocation of the dysfunctional family:
	. . . his mother
	prays to the virgin
	but decides to pray
	to the mirror
Geoff Stevens provides a brilliantly sustained piece (a spoof on Dylan Thomas's FERN HILL) called SPURN HILL, in which the poet bemoans his lack of libido:
	And then to awake, and like a wanderer, white
	with bedroom flesh, to arise, cock-crowing
	at tile shining, it was like Adam and the Maiden,
	a new day dawning
Well-known poet, artist, children's book author, publisher, John Light, provides one or two of his exquisite line drawings.

Let's take a look at some of the other poets in this large issue: Earl Coleman, Steve Taylor, Richard Arnold, Helen Buckingham, Amanda Doering, Willie James King, to name a few. There's a lovely line of writing that runs through River King from political poems through ecological poems to personal poems. It's hard to pick out favourites or typically modern poems from this mix, but how about this, from Ian Seed's poem TOAD:

	This week on TV I saw children
	from the poorest quarter of Warsaw
	who cut the front legs off a toad
	and danced around him: victims
	making new victims.
or this, from Earl Coleman's poem CLOSING THE BOOKS:
	We're tipsy May-flies on their
	single-day carouse while Stonehenge,
	marking every second of the night and day
	still weights the earth and stays.
River King feels like a good presence on the literary scene, and you should get this issue, submit poems and make a donation. Here's to a healthy plethora of such magazines. Support them: subscribe to them as well as submitting work.

reviewer: Patricia Prime.
River King Poetry Supplement Vol. IX #I

This publication from Illinois is 12 page newspaper format which aims to supply those interested in contemporary poetry. Glancing through it, there is variety but I would like to see an even fuller range of contemporary work on balance. For instance, I particularly like contemporary haiku, sijo, haibun, visual and linguistical offerings and non were present. However, there was a nice selection and maybe other editions will carry such forms.

The standard is high. It seems that unlike most poetry journals and magazines, it does accept previously published work. It offers quite an exciting mixture and it succeeds in having a contemporary feel. This is from Dave Etter's NEWLYWEDS:

	Oh my
	we were
	young then
	and in-
	nocent
	and new-
	ly wed
This issue contains a four page section dedicated to contemporary Canadian poets and this is from NOTE TO THE WOMAN WHO DANCED IN THE PARK TODAY, by Gary Hyland:
	You waltzed through the park's
	long grass, feet flashing and diving

	like fish in and out of the shadow
	waves beneath the trees, your blue dress,
The poets are presented by single poems only, except for a page which is devoted to the poems of John Knoepfle (Poet's Choice section). I hope River King continues to obtain the good publicity it deserves because it is well edited and it offers variety and high standards. Furthermore, it is distributed free, and this is unusual for high quality poetry journals and magazines. Get in touch with your Illinois colleagues and get your own copy.

reviewer: Doreen King.