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The Same Vol.3 #2

An A4, 28 page magazine containing poems, articles, and stories. Overall, the standard is reasonably high, although some of the poems seem a little wordy. The format is pleasing, with writing interspersed with little sketches by different artists. Susan Carmen's poem, MARCHING ORDERS, has a light-hearted touch:

	My neighbor's lawn is Emerald City green,
	trimmed like a Marine's
	buzz cut, short and tight,
	not a blade out of place.
In this poem, a neighbour is proud of his garden, and likes to keep it exactly so. That is, until he is taken away by ambulance. The subject of death is also taken up by Phyllis Becker, in the poem THE MOUNTAINS WHERE MY BROTHER LIVED:
	She tells me how he
	laughed at a picture
	of me and my boyfriend;
	our heads together,
	smiling, goofy, drunk.
	I pace myself,
	redwoods and firs
	surround us.
There is a section on FORMAL CONSIDERATIONS and this issue deals with renga. A reasonable account is given, but then finishes by saying that for another example of renga, see Gerald England's CALIFORNIA BOUND. One of the joys of the haiku form is its flexibility and I would describe England's poem rather in terms of an interesting sequence on the subject of travel:
	sun shines on snow-scape
	we are flying
	above the clouds

	spreading wobbly marmalade
	at 29,000 feet

	Schiphol Airport
	miles and miles of walkways
	between the gates

reviewer: Doreen King
The Same Vol.4 #1

This is a 28-page magazine, bound in gray card, folded to North American A4 size, with the contents arranged in one, two or three columns. In this issue's REGULARS section, there are two editorials (both interesting ones) and a very useful column called WEB NOTES, which gives a brief précis of several web-sites dealing with matters of interest to readers and authors who want to learn more about recent developments in web resources. This is an unusual feature for a magazine of this kind, and it is a very welcome one, I think. There is also one short story, fourteen monochrome illustrations by various artists, and a total of forty-six poems by thirty-two poets. The editors describe the magazine's stance as 'modernist rather than post-modernist', and this is evidenced clearly in the work published.

My favourite poem here is the curiously-titled piece, JIFFY POP FOR JESUS, by Donna Biffar, in which pop-corn effectively becomes a symbol for the colonization of the Americas. The poem begins with the immediate, or post-colonial experience:

	Long after she sent us to bed I listened
	for the spill of seeds against metal,
	the sound of parched corn popping
	into Cortes' white flowers
	crushed beneath the teeth of conquest.
And leads backwards through one person's memories to a type of race memory — at once a clan of middle-American plains settler-colonists, and a pre-Columbian family group — with the lines,
	we dug our nails into the cob meat,
	yanked the teardrop seeds
	and peered into our blue glass jars,
	blue as the sky should be—
which leave it unclear whether there is any distinction being drawn between the two species of memory. It's an intriguing piece which asks to be read several times.

Other poems in very different styles are also impressive. Patrick Dobson's NEW LIGHT sequence is vivid and controlled, and I especially like the concluding lines:

	the river
	mirrors ignited
	wineglasses of sun
Kate Barsotti's THE PRIEST offers the cleric as a first-person speaker who recounts many of his mundane acts of charity and hardship before suddenly declaring,
	I should confess
	I was once the angel
	who pressed his hands  over the Virgin's lips.
The poem ends by fusing these images of the divine and the quotidian with the words:
	This afternoon, I'll get on my knees
	to wash the church steps
	and paint her robe a deeper shade of blue.
Matthew Porubsky's DAYDREAM GIRL NO. 8 1/2 (FOR FEDERICO FELLINI) subtly embodies some complex emotions, and also ends attractively:
	the next day you return,
	dressed like a black swan,
	and drive me to a dreamy alleyway
	where you sit on a stone step,
	your chin on your knees,
	wind whistling in our ears,
	and you talk about love and salvation.
	you see right through me,
	to the confusion,
	but you smile with dark eyes and long lashes,
	waiting to bring order through innocence.
Such attention to pace, evocation and complexity of mood as demonstrated by all four of these writers stands out particularly in this issue, as the bulk of the poetry is somewhat prosy, discursive and uncomplicated. But if it is something of a hit-or-miss affair, the hits are very sound ones, and the integrity evidenced by the editors suggests that whatever else it may be, ironically, THE SAME will remain a venue for work that is difficult to characterize easily. If there were no other reasons to do so, this alone would make it worth reading.

reviewer: John Ballam