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Moonstone #93 | |
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I have not encountered this magazine before, but it is obviously well-established, and many of its contributors have track records. It has, as well as the poems themselves, an initial page of notes on contributors and a final page listing books received (both, I have to say, in a type-face as evilly-illegible and cramped as any I have seen), and it has a drawing of a "portal" at Tintagel on its front cover (again, I must say, rather crude). The name of the magazine is in attractive Celtic-type design, and there are other suggestions of what I shall in my semi-ignorance have to call New Ageism The contents are not commitedly New Age had they been so, it would have made them distinctive, though not particularly appealing to me personally. But if more magazines were tarred with distinctive brushes, would-be contributors would more clearly know where they stand. Perhaps, indeed, there is more specialism out there than I am aware of. The poems themselves are varied in style and content, though there is a strong vein of landscape/nature writing, and more than a little faded Romanticism in the vocabulary: dim, tranquil, pale, misty put in appearances, sometimes repeatedly, and there is a lot of sun, moon, silver and earth about. Not many poems escape these unwelcome Romantic clutches, so when Geoff Stevens, in ROACHES, writes: We can see Tittesworth from here two-dimensional and shrunken by drought a pale blue rag of a reservoir thrown down in the valley and leaking slowly into the Caldon Canalin spite of one of the no-no words listed above, I was pleased to see something relatively real. More real, for instance, than Mary Robinson's SNOWDROPS: As the dim cobwebbed eyes register a little more light the derelict house spreads her bridal veil of snowdrops before the trees' brachioli breathe the winter sunToo little of the writing derives from the pressure of real experience that is clamouring for release. When you take your eye off the object, this is the kind of thing you might find yourself writing (first line here, fine, second line just fabricated: the subject is CANDLEMAS ROBIN, and the poem is by Richard Bonfield): The keeper of the old years flame He lights new candles in the rainSome arm-twisting happening there to make the bird accord with the name of the season. Some poems just try too hard, e.g. Ronnie Goodyer's ON GWYNVER BEACH: Winter winds blast the breakers five lines deep and whip the top foam to spiral deaths.A few, not many, are impenetrable, e.g. Steve Sneyd's ABOVE DOVESTONES RES: looks rust what holds into one piece crumble of monument right onBut the main impression the writing in this magazine gave me is of a faded, unimpressive Romanticism, of which this sample, from Tina Negus's WINTER SOLSTICE, is characteristic: Midwinter's rising sun awakes, Flaming, above the hill Marking the distant eastern rim, Banishing night-time's chill...Ken Champion is one of the few poets represented whose writing seems to derive from on-the-pulse experience, and his HOMECOMING is one of the few poems I warmed to: one of the few which offers some substance, and a challenge: I enter through a grudging door and walk into a room via the wall. I sit in a chair and drift to the floor as a small boy walks through my legs and skips his way down the hall to ask when I'll be here... | ||
| reviewer: Eddie Wainwright | ||
| Moonstone #96 | ||
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In a script no bigger than 12point, 'Pantheistic/ ecological' subscriptions to MOONSTONE are invited on its back page. This rather low key reference to the magazine's character is reflected in the generous range of writers and subjects included in issue 96. There is strength in this diversity. The contents of MOONSTONE retain a distinct 'open air' feel, as exemplified by the first piece, inspired by St. Kilda, a part of Britain where the air is certainly bracing. It's unclear and unimportant whether Kenneth Steven's poem is actually set on the islands, or whether it is capturing their power to inspire a musician, over 70 years after the evacuation: He lay there in the small hours before the dawn, And the Atlantic swelled through the room, Bringing in its fingers stories of far away, Of long ago, of make believe.Another strong sense of history is created in Deborah Tyler-Bennett's sonnet, HENGE GATHERING. Inspired by a painting, the poem deploys an understated rhyme scheme and some marvellously bleak imagery to capture the disappearing significance of the stones: Mercurial, sunk puddles stain, reflecting titans doubled-up in pain, long miles from farm, hunt lodge or grange.In VICTIMS, J.P.V. Stewart, another assured writer, depicts two brief and otherwise ordinary lives, whose details underline the indiscriminate brutality of war. An 18 year old Englishman, is killed in the 'steel blizzard of No Man's Land' at the beginning of World War I. Another teenager, a German Jew called Ruth, is led 'to the gas chamber' when: The first fires of romance were touching her with its forlorn dream.The poet knows better than to attempt any kind of heavy-handed conclusion: a characteristic of nearly all the poets represented in this issue. Geoff Stevens, for example, recreates an Irish journey without whimsy, but with some subtle ornament. The shorescape is reminiscent of Heaney's early work: The blurred expanse of sea with its archipelago linked by serpentine bridges . their battlefields of rock corpsed with single-story houses and lone seacraft.The external world is the muse for many other writers. Margaret Edwards, in the neatly-titled THE LIE OF THE LAND portrays the sleepy landscape with a bold eroticism, where: Fingers could idly drift down stream-gully, groove-tracing, probing cleft.With similar skill, Denise Margaret Hargrave imbues HAZE OVER WESTERDALE with carefully-conceived layers of colour, while Alan Hardy's NEGATIVE PICTURE is similarly evocative, in a studied monochrome. The magazine features pieces like Anne Mawer's BOLAND TRYST, at the more traditional end of the spectrum, as well as intriguing pieces by J.C. Hartley and Steve Sneyd. Its recommendations and listings are kept concise, to maximize the number of publications and writers mentioned and MOONSTONE is reasonably priced, too. | ||
| reviewer: Will Daunt | ||
| Moonstone #97 | ||
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MOONSTONE #97, Imbolc 2005, gives an example of simplicity employed in the service of poetry. Its relatively inexpensive A5 production belies the many poems sandwiched between the light card covers and the range of poetry includes quite a few notable English names. As to be expected from a spring issue many of the poems are concerned with the seasonal change from winter to spring and the inspiration to be found in the oldest of themes. In WINTER SCENE, Michael Newman describes: abnormal light; snow Which has given morning A pristine beauty.Denise Margaret Hargreave distils winter in her WINTER MAGIC, as snowflakes blossomHowever UNEXPECTED is a very effective haiku by Anne Mawer. She allows the snowdrops to herald the ending of winter, standing pert as ballerinasin the most unexpected of places for the onlooker to find. Outside of the seasonal theme is a preoccupation with ordinary things, CAT SITTING, by Catherine Jeffrey, depicts a developing relationship between animal and human, as a moment caught in time, with the final reward given as a silent purr.Andrew Mayne challenges the foreign through the ordinary in THE ONIONERS. The poem's voice depicts a first meeting with the quintessential French image of the cycling onion seller but he moves them to northern England, where the exotic seems hopelessly unrelated and unattractive, if not surreal. Indeed the closing line of the poem where they seem ...to a child an emblem of the true patheticshows the reader just how irrelevant the Gallic Onioners might seem to someone from the slate-grey northern stronghold. Even the poems title removes any air of mystique that a French title might perhaps bestow. Taken together, MOONSTONE 97 makes for interesting reading with plenty of variety in the material's arrangement. | ||
| reviewer: Barbara Smith. | ||
| Moonstone #98 | ||
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MOONSTONE's bowing out with issue 100. However, editors Talitha Clare and Robin Brooks do have plans for a best of anthology and possibly another magazine in the future. As the date suggests, many poems within have pagan/moon themes. Juliet Wilson's MYTHOLOGIES OF THE MOON starts and ends with: New moon is she virgin. Full moon she is mother. Waning she is wise, healer and transformer.A J Cartmel-Crossley's SPRING SONG ends ...Plant deep the shrieking poisoned mandrake root, Then draw from mother earth new season's fruit.The only nod to modernity is in Richard Bonfield's KATE MOSS AND OTHER NARCISSI Leggy models on spring's catwalk Daffodils sway their willowy hips and pout their luscious lemony lips The turn their heads towards the sun the paparazzi's flashing guns.where dropping the clichéd luscious and rethinking the position of the apostrophe in the last line would have made for a stronger poem. If you like poems on pagan/ecological themes, MOONSTONE's for you. Contact the editors for more details about the proposed best of anthologies. | ||
| reviewer: Emma Lee |