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Braquemard #8 | |
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The chatty, slightly puckish editorial or "introduction" as it's less formally headed here, sets the tone for the aggregate mood of the poems which follow, many of which have a colloquial, ghoulish or humourous aspect. Not that I'm implying the poems are slight. On the contrary, most of the poems are trying to do something interesting or original and many of them succeed. The opening poem by John West explores his disquiet at the death of a girl he hardly knew but cannot remember or forget not your name or face just the way you diedHe handles the subject very well and leaves us with a similar sense of uneasiness. Duane Locke's four poems come across as slightly surreal parables of uncertain application, a little like Jacques Prevert. They work pretty well with an ingenuous oddness. An interesting writer with a distinct approach. Another poet whose work is an imaginative flight of fancy is T. Kretz whose stream of consciousness poem I LOOKED HER UP IN THE DICTIONARY contains much in the way of original thoughts. Free-flowing energy thrown down on the page doesn't necessarily make great poetry but it makes an entertaining read none-the-less. Black humour is well to the fore. Rick Kennett's THE RICHEST MAN IN THE CEMETERY is one example : a tomb with a view a grave with its own backyard. There he sleeps in satin comfort With pockets in his shroud.Another is Bruce Barnes' THE DEAD CITIZENS CHARTER there are failures to live to live up to. They're rare but cinematic: a lock fails The coffin slips out of the back, And the hearse drives on;A DELAYED PREFACE TO THE BOOK OF PUTREFACTION has Bruce Barnes inviting : concertinas of larvae to play after-dinner music to the left hand side of my brain.David Hill produces humourous, well structured, and rhyming verses. The first verse of one of his offerings here, CIGARETTES, shows his style : Cigarettes are too expensive Public taxes, corporate greed. Sometimes when I'm feeling pensive Cigarettes are what I need.Perhaps the strongest poems are those from D.H.W. Grubb, LISTENING TO LAZARUS and three poems from Derrick Buttress, while there are other poems which, for me didn't quite work. Taken as a whole though, Braquemard presents poetry of a good standard and with a clear editorial bias in favour of visual imagery, humour, energy and towards the fantastic and surreal imagination, and which supports its regular contributors by allowing space for several of their poems. It deserves to be among those poetry magazines that survive for some years to come. | ||
| reviewer: Graham High. | ||
| Braquemard #9 | ||
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This is a literary magazine with very definite ideas about the sort of material it wishes to publish. Editor David Allenby wants to see poetry and short prose which shows bad taste, black humour and [investigates] the sick side of human nature.So this is definitely not the place to send your oh-so-earnest poems about daffodils or the need for a more inclusive society. However, this is not to imply that Braquemard is a magazine prepared to dispense entirely with literary standards in order to fill its pages with blood, guts and black masses. Far from it. A few years back I received a rejection slip from Allenby in which he told me that "though he liked my poems for their tastelessness, he thought that, as poems, they simply weren't good enough." And, indeed, with the benefit of hindsight, he was probably right. This issue is poetry only and EAST LONDON, 1888 by Suzanne Burns is a suitably Gothic example of the sort of thing Braquemard likes, written, as it is, from the point of view of the women murdered by Jack the Ripper: And they never knew your proper name To carve on marble pedestals and shatter Like the pillars of an ancient place. When you interred us, all of Whitechapel, With only the fuel of your internal cutting, Ripped, and unraveled at the seams, For one-hundred years our grainy pictures Blown-up and analyzed, how you laid Us gently on the ground, sliced Silent smiles across our mouths, Arranged our viscera like sweets lifted From the sticky velvet beneath our ribs, The valentines of our hearts carrying The secret of your initials to our graves.And in LIVE FROM THE DEATH HOUSE a poem about the execution of Timothy McVeigh Margot K. Juby serves up some equally gruesome imagery: the chemicals twitch the tubing, a quiver takes the audience as the inmate gasps loudly, twice, his skin yellows, his lips go blue and his eyes, my god, his eyes wide open. This is it.My favourite in this issue though is Gordon Kennedy's excellent INSPIRATION, which really does demand to be quoted in full: the latch of cripplegate drops crooked into place above a clockface staring blankly from the stocks as never's ropehand rings the chapel bell & reads the brailleblack bible of the gravestone & the rope is plaited round thirteenly & the windpipe pipes the sweetest descant & the barrel-organ wheezes out its marche funebre till our stretched man makes a noise of nothing (till oh utterly & utterly the song syringe lies broken in the cold black gutter of the vein) in death's impassive face the hanged man now ejaculates a spray of glitter, dust & ground-up pills while all the time a funeral oration for the living rings like starlight thru the upper window & vibrates the christmas lights, like bells.Other highlights include Brian Connell's humourous STALKER, JPV Stewart's NIGHTMARE AT LAST DITCH FARM and Helen Kitson's LACHRYMA CHRISTI: with opening lines like Do I stink? Can you smell the blood between my legs?what can one do but read on. There are a few clunkers though. Paul Birtill's FIREMEN tries to shock but ends up just being boring: The most corrupt profession in the world A job for sneaky little shits and greedy ego-maniacs.T.F. Griffin's BECKETT'S ARMS is so dull it reads like something shoved in at the last minute to fill space. And the inclusion of Virgil Suarez's ISLA DE LA JUVENTUD, CUBA simply mystifies me. The poem itself is actually quite well written. But what in the world is this rather solemn poem about, I think, the 'failure' of the Castro Revolution doing in a magazine which prides itself on avoiding "explicit religion, politics etc"? However, despite such occasional lapses Braquemard is still one of the most interesting magazines around. David Allenby clearly has a very distinct editorial vision. All one can do is hope that, in future issues, he'll continue to provide a platform for worthy poems about the Jack the Rippers and Timothy McVeighs of this world and send any po-faced anti-Castro Cubans (or such like), who happen to come his way, straight to the waste-paper basket without a moment's hesitation. | ||
| reviewer: Kevin Higgins. | ||
| Braquemard #10 | ||
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The first thing to note is that this issue will be the last to carry prose (in this case by DF Lewis). The editor, David Allenby, also admits that there is no discernible theme to this issue so this reviewer will not attempt to find one! Thirty two poets are featured and old mono illustrations decorate some of the pages. All the poems are worth reading but of particular note is David Angel's OMBLIGO, a perceptive and slightly dark insightful look at birth where I floated like a dreaming diver. I was safe, I was inside the barrel. My flavours developed like wine.Caroline Oulton's AT INTERVALS is a discreet and penetrating comment on the interplay in relationships and Howard Wright uses form in LITTLE STEPS to create the echo of the various kinds of little steps that make and break a relationship. Lewis' short story THE SPECKLED TEAPOT is a neat story about post-war recovery and manages to recreate a time and place as well as include a touch of humour a worthy last prose contribution. This is a lively and well wrought issue recommended. | ||
| reviewer: Polly Bird. |