![]() Tremblestone Stowford House 43 Seymour Avenue St. Judes Plymouth PL4 8RB UK ISSN 1463-9181 £4 [overseas £5] Subscriptions: 3 issues £10 [overseas £15] ![]() Before commenting on this review please read the FAQ page Home page Notes for publishers Want to be a reviewer? Anthologies. Books. Audio. Magazines. Software. Video. Artefacts. Web design by Gerald England This page last updated: 13th October 2004. |
Tremblestone #3 | |
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Martin Anderson's BETWEEN epitomises a fairly typical TREMBLESTONE poem, ending ...Trembling, with all we know but cannot name, indigo ink of nights drawn down upon us looking up only a tutelage of signs to ferry us through the dark matrix of our selves, to what constructed place, that could welcome us, would we come determinated, and brief held by, no other possessions than these.that has a good balance of introspection, energy and a hint of risk-taking. The editor's SOAP, provides some light relief. For Bill and Monica The tabloid operatic Society are in town Working undercover Harmonica plays Washington blues Harmonica between Your lips Softly blowing Dallas meets Dynasty On Pennsylvania Avenue Flashbulb vampires Undress night Sperm on the flag While America dreams The world's a bar Of soap Slippery Pull back the bed sheets And climb inside the news.The reviews section makes TREMBLESTONE definitely worth checking out. Steve Spence, Alice Domingo and James Turner make a solid team unafraid of reputation and prepared to justify both praise and criticism. A young magazine with a good beginning and one to watch. | ||
| reviewer: Emma Lee. | ||
| Tremblestone #4 | ||
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An unappealing cover which thinks it's clever. Inside, the typeface is odd to say the least. On a number of pages the page number is on a line with the last line of script, an error no printer should be allowed to get away with. If Pims Digital of Basildon, Essex were my printer I should also query why on page 62 three out of the five ampersands are in bold. All are of a greater height than any of the type. The editor needs to sack the printer unless he's married to the printer's daughter. Though when we get to the work of Andrew Nightingale I admit my heart bleeds for the typesetter. As for the poets and their editor Kenny Knight I have the feeling they are all wearing rose coloured glasses. Dare I suggest TREMBLESTONE read EATS, SHOOTS & LEAVES if only to read the panda joke. (ISBN 1-86197-612-7). And yes the book title is a deliberate error. The poetry: this is one line of Josephine Ebert from her long poem THE BLIND VOYEUR: I told my philosophy class that and they believed me and so did their wives ETC.The poem continues with these two lines: Now the darkness prunes around me And the seven mystic ships creak in the darkness of my prunesThe idea of darkness being compared to the colour of prunes could be attractive. That may be what she's getting at but I wouldn't bank on it. The word is used here both as a noun and as a verb. The verb to prune is to cut back or cut down. A poet must get the words right. There is such a thing as taking poetic licence a bit too far. An idea in poetry is not enough on its own. Nor is verbal dexterity. This is the only poem in the magazine where the title is recognizable as a title. And TREMBLESTONE is riddled with dashes. Not one I would buy. A typesetter's nightmare. But we have to have variety in the world and this is only one person's reaction. | ||
| reviewer: P.J. Precious. |