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Keystone #1

Keystone is a slim booklet of poems by British poets and has a cover photograph in black and white by Lawrence Clark. With the publication of Keystone, the editor is hoping to attract submissions of poetry, prose, translations, critical reviews and essays, both from Britain and abroad and information on the magazine's web page is included in the magazine.

This first issue contains the work of nine poets. Some of these are familiar names in Britain: Tony Curtis, Richard Caddel and David Caddy, whilst other names are less well known. Lucy Newlyn offers two poems with heavy themes: domestic violence and prostitution, but handles them with a deft touch. She shows an economy of style though the best poems offer more by way of implication or vividness. Tony Curtis is good in QUILT

	the stitch-raised edges
	of everything
	joined and still
and in ILLUMINATING THE TEXT, where the distractions in a lecture room lead to a greater understanding of the text before the students.

S. C. Gordon is good on the lesson learned by a girl visiting a museum, and in VIEW OF CUPID, writes, possibly about the same girl, as she views a statue of Cupid with her partner, who takes solace in the loneliness of the stone figure:

	She holds a cigarette between her lips
	and says again, 'Romance is dead'
	as if he hadn't heard her first time round.

	He says, sardonic — 'Yes, you said'
	and scuffs his toe into the ground.
Nicely done in unobtrusive rhyme. The dream-like associative procedures of the two poems are effective.

Richard Caddel's sequence of poems reads a bit flatly, but this seems to be deliberate. Boundaries, borders, wonderment, sea birds and sea scapes are his subjects, and the tone is one of studied nonchalance as in BREAKER:

	This is land, we know it
	And it breaks our step.
	There is grey sea.
Bernard O'Donahue and Sara Boyes study the effect eyes have upon people in OLD BLUE-EYES:
	You look as if you've been crying,
	but you haven't particularly.
	It's only ageing:
and in BLACK FLAME
	Her eyes slide along the words and over him
Tom Chivers has a striking, individual voice and a powerful one. EFFRA, about a river, is particularly good. Matthew Paskins poems are lively and unique, whilst David Caddy is, like Chivers, a distinctive, original voice. In MARBLES he writes interestingly on the seemingly mundane themes of cycling, the movement of light among leaves and marbles:
	Emptied they fell into clusters,
	huddled like layabouts,
	coupling and clinking
	and pulling towards
	some new understanding.
In much the same way, the poems in this collection, intriguing and confident, combine and ring towards a new understanding.

reviewer: Patricia Prime.
Keystone #3

Keystone is an ambitious magazine based in Oxford. In its third issue, which contains poetry and one prose text, there are a few very well known names, like U. A. Fanthorpe and Bernard O'Donoghue. This number is dedicated to the memory of poet Richard Caddel who passed away in the spring of 2003. Tom Chivers, editor of Keystone, quotes some lines from Caddel's poem SIX WORKERS ON THE NORTHUMBRIAN COAST IN THE DARK BETWEEN LAND AND SEA, printed in the first issue of this publication (2002). In the light of the poet's recent demise, the beautiful quotation assumes some additional, sad significance:

	We are
	on an edge, knowing it's our
	livelihood. Somewhere
	a pale moon rises, we're
	at boundaries talking and breathing.
The poems in this issue are generally quite good; perhaps seldom very remarkable, but nothing is really bad or banal. Marie-Louise Hogan in NAMESAKES shows a great sense of humour, as does K. M. Dersley in ALF'S ROUNDELAY. Both writers have also other pieces here, often nicely descriptive.

Lucy Newlyn's LANDSCAPE NEAR OTLEY is a skilfully painted verbal picture with

	All but the drabbest pigment drained away,
	 . . . 
	but a few pale drabs for the sheep
	under the thin, wandering diagonal
	belt of dry-stone wall,
	where the threadbare grain of the high fells
	meets the flat grey wash of sky.
Tom Chivers himself has contributed a fine apple poem, MARPHA, that seems to give off a faint smell of cider, and clearly has overtones of Genesis and the forbidden fruit. Fanthorpe, too, writes well about fruit, in her case grapes, with elegant allusions to classical mythology and cult (ROUTE DES GRAPPES). O'Donoghue's very free sonnet FLOCKS AND COMPANIES is about birds, not fruits: the cuckoo, the corncrake, the wren, the mistle-thrush. I'm always grateful for such exact details. But the same poem also, on some level, concerns people (and foxes), and reveals a subtly pacifist slant towards the end.

S. C. Gordon's prose piece ANGELO ANGELO begins with the remarkable sentence:

Angelo Angelo's day starts at about eight thirty when he rises from his white double bed, kisses the feet of the Virgin, and sips the remnants of last night's last drink.
Gordon's delightfully light touch is evident also in her poem LIKE.

All this seems to promise a bright future for Keystone. But, to be honest, I must add that I find the diction in several if not all of the poems a little bland, a little conventional and uninspiring. In spite of this, Keystone appears to have the capacity — in purely literary terms — to develop into an unusually sophisticated little magazine.

reviewer: Susanna Roxman.
Keystone #4

Presents itself casually as "an irregular poetry magazine", but presents those poems well and attracts quality contributors, eg Rupert Loydell's NEW YORK LETTERS

	...though that fence
	of shirts and flowers, messages
	and flags got to me a bit. As did
	the chips and scars on the buildings
	all around. I’m glad I went up
	the towers once, but like everybody
	else these days, I don’t want to
	go that high. Basement stores
	and dimlit bars are good enough...
where the easy casual language and chatty rhythm cover but don't hide the serious message underneath. Claire Wilkinson's sonnet BETWEEN
	...But we must fall. The sun that strokes the wings
	Of feathered birds illuminates us too,
	But it is too bright for thought. We lose the things
	We love in our brief flight, and then the glue
	That holds our minds together melts. We sing:
	And then the cool dark sea wraps us in blue.
still carries a note of optimism as does Sylvia Westall's MOTH
	...Grey pebble
	You are the night butterfly
	Hand singing blind
	Strobe-sudden drawn
	Know me always
	And I will open my hand.
Poetry and a presentation that allows the poems to breathe. Worth checking out.

reviewer: Emma Lee.