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Purple Patch #101

The first impression I got browsing through Purple Patch was that it seemed like something of a throwback to the good old (or should that be bad old) days of the late 70s/early 80s. Its production values are basic, deliberately so according to editor Geoff Stevens, who in his 'GOSSIP COLUMN' — more about that anon — says that though:

Martin Holroyd [of Poetry Monthly] did a great job producing [the special centenary issue of] PP ...lots of you said that you preferred the old individual and untidy presentation that went before.
The aforementioned GOSSIP COLUMN — an interesting idea which other magazines should perhaps consider trying — is often amusing and more than occasionally cranky. Given some of his targets — Carol Rumens, Simon Armitage, Andrew Motion and 'professional' poets in general — it seems Stevens has a particular axe to grind with the literary establishment. And whatever one may think of his views, he at least has the courage to grind that axe in public.

The quality of the poetry is mixed. Some of it, such as DAYS by Jeremy Worman, is very good indeed:

	what are the ways of days
	do days remember what and how

	no, we make days live and mean
	arrange the notes they give

	calendars, months, reunions, years
	we are masters of the days

	yet, as moments twitch and pass
	we're the ones who lose face

	as days rub us white like bone
Elsewhere, however, it sometimes seems a little unfinished:
	AUTUMN IN THE PARK

	October has finally expired.
	Autumn is all decay.
	The ditch is clogged with leaves,
	And backs up into overspill.
	Trees are skeletons,
	Bear witness to forgotten ritual.

	The Summer house is padlocked,
	And tennis but a memory.
	Starlings mark out octaves on the telephone wires.
	The pond slimes over.
	November is a tang and tingle of mist,
	And dusk a wine-draught red,
	Refrigerated.

	Michael Newman
The first two lines in the second stanza are lovely, "The Summer house is padlocked, / and tennis but a memory." Seasonal poems like this so often sound horribly generic. But Newman's images are somehow just specific enough to make us stop and listen. However, the first stanza is a bit of a mess. The first two lines, in which he tells us that, "October has finally expired" and "Autumn is all decay", really are completely unnecessary. They tell us nothing we hadn't already gathered from the poem's title. It reads rather as if Newman had an 'idea for a poem', an idea which didn't really take off until the second stanza, but by then he was too tired to go back and revise the first stanza. It is, I'm sure, a crime of which most poets have been guilty at one time or another.

As well as these fairly conventional poems there are a few it's difficult to know exactly what to make of. Stephen Owen's CHANT FOR VLADIMIR LENIN 111 for example would, I think, have mystified even the KGB. Although of course they'd probably have thrown him in the Gulag anyway, just to be on the safe side.

In the light of what I said earlier about the slightly anachronistic whiff I got from the magazine, an interesting poem is Derek Kortlandt's MANDELVAZ:

	how are the smarmy fallen
	the modernisers, the dapper deriders
	who bludgeoned us with jargon
	these smart performers
	who have reformed us
	with a sighing scorn
	have had the their fingers
	in the ethical till
	but lecture us still
	for our lack of style.
Not the greatest political satire ever written, perhaps. It is of interest mostly because of what it tells us about PURPLE PATCH editor Geoff Stevens. His agenda — if that's the right word for it — seems to be one which involves a refusal to make any sort of compromise with the slick superficiality personified by the ghastly Mr Mandelson. And at a time when it sometimes seems — the world of poetry perhaps mirroring the world of politics — that networking and spin are at least as important as talent and substance, this can only be a good thing. For the next issue Stevens wants
poems about the angry young men of the 50's and 60's.
Now why doesn't that surprise me?

reviewer: Kevin Higgins.
Purple Patch #104

It's difficult to take a number of poets, give them a theme such as "Angry Young Man" and ask them to write on it, and to come up with a homogenous issue. But the editor, Geoff Stevens, succeeds admirably with this issue of Purple Patch.

The result? An unusual hybrid, hard for the reader to know where the lines are drawn. The solution? Just relax and enjoy it because it's a marvellous, fascinating read.

ANGRY YOUNG MEN was a title given to a group of British writers of the early 1950s, notably John Osborne, Kingsley Amis and John Wain. Their work was marked by irreverence towards the Establishment, disgust at the survival of class distinctions and privilege, and contempt for what they saw as the narrowness and drabness of postwar life. It is epitomized by Osborne's play LOOK BACK IN ANGER, and its central character, Jimmy Porter.

The editor tells us in his opening essay just who these angry young men were, how they came to get this name, and the names of other writers who could also have been included in this category. Stevens tells us that these writers,

. . . wanted to keep what was best and change that which was bad.
Purple Patch includes poems from a majority of male poets: Les Merton, Sam Smith, Brendan Hawthorne, Gordon Scapens, and others, but only three poems by women: Lynda Nash's 1970'S RETROSPECTIVE, Trish O'Brien's CREEP WITH THE CATS and Geraldine Stevens' THE REAL REASON. I find this mix slightly biased as several women writers of her generation were greatly influenced by the work of Shelagh Delaney, whose play A TASTE OF HONEY (later made into a film) was one of the innovations of this era:
Women never have young minds. They are born three thousand years old. — (A TASTE OF HONEY, 1959, I, ii).
Sam Smith's PLUS CA CHANGE is a lovely spoof on Larkin. That magnificent flawed man, who punished himself and others, a legend who has insinuated himself into our thoughts and feelings:
	Was Larkin watching me in 1963?
	I didn't, however, wank over Chatterley,
	and I had no designs on a Beatles' LP.
	My idea of musical heaven
		would have been tea
		with the Temperance Seven. 
Gordon Scapens in MR. SATURDAY NIGHT uses language as a painter might approach a canvas, building up the textures of the physical and social landscapes:
	Mr. Saturday night,
	throwing up outside the bar,
	has his brains in his pants
	and Sunday already howling
	in his wardrobe.
Trish O'Brien's poem CREEP WITH THE CATS gives us a woman's viewpoint of this era:
	Me, pissed as a fart,
	after thirteen gin and limes,
	jiving solo on the table tops
	in tartan trews —
	later, on the free bus home
	hands and knees up the aisle
Ah, yes. I remember it well! Geraldine Stevens' poem THE REAL REASON perhaps sums up for us why so few women writers acknowledge this period:
	No.
	The real reason
	you never hear women going on about the 50's
	and men never stop is . . .
 
	It was the last time they were in charge.
Purple Patch also contains an article on John Braine THE BOTTOM LINE by Geoff Stevens, a story BOTTLE by Paul Skinner, a page of quotes about the Angry Young Men, information about a poetry weekend, competitions, magazine reviews, magazines received and a recommended reading/viewing list.

reviewer: Patricia Prime.
Purple Patch #109

I'm familiar with Purple Patch and at a fiver for three issues it is a real bargain. The first thing to strike me was the variety of styles which I feel adds richness to the overall production. You will find narrative, humour, imagry, rhyme, descriptive poems, music and some deeply moving pieces.

A fine example is competition winner WEATHER REPORT (about a missing child) by A.J. Cartmel-Crossley. Rain is forecast from start to finish. It really touched me and reminded me of the tragic Bulger case in Liverpool. From verse 1:

	on the news
	another tragic mother airs her fear
	for a vanished child who's disappeared
	wondered [sic?] off, or snatched or worse
and in verse 3
	on the news
	reporters clamour, microphones jab at passers-by
	white-suited searchers prod the ground with sticks...

	now senior coppers stage-manage their concern
	and spot-lit parents parade their pain again...
from verse 5
	and grave-faced clergy simper hollow phrases
	florists do good business
IGNOMINY by Richard Titman is a comical look at a hangover with lines like
	Just wait till you look in the mirror
or
	you can't remember how you got home
	but you recall a sharp slap in the face
	after groping somebody's wife.
Too ashamed the author writes in the third person.

CHICKEN SMILE by Christopher Taylor was moving

	here i am
	an alien once again
	with a note pad and pen
	looking like a relic or a grandparent
	tomorrow I'll come here with my son
	i often do
	he'll wear the chicken smile
	and I'll feel as young as him
CROW by Denis Leckey tellingly compares a singing voice to a crow
	you're a cheeky thing croaking this early
	very much less than perfect pitch

	...
	you got away with it just like
	Michael Crawford in Phantom Of The Opera.
Other poems to catch my eye were THOUGHTS LIKE THUNDER CLOUDS by Maureen Weldon who was inspired to say
	writing volumes of air is not my style
in defence of her poetry output, and METAMORPHOSIS by Christopher James who penned a poem about the Angel of the North sculpture which has good flow and tone though I sense a darker side and twist to it.

The last two poems I want to mention are LYING TOGETHER by A. David Brown and DARK SIDE by Belinda Cooke. Brown's poem questions habit and his longtern affair. It opens

	we lie together, and we speak, we lie together
Cooke describes someone living in a bedsit and the reader is invited to place themself in this place:
	The paint is always a brown that was once cream
	...
	They must have had mothers — moments
	...
	Where food is always tinned or frozen
The issue is a good read and has something for every reader. I think the range reflects the interests and experience of editor Geoff Stevens.

reviewer: Lee McLaughlin.