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Nicholas Bielby
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Pennine Platform #55

PENNINE PLATFORM is similar to many small press publications: modest in size and unpretentious in its presentation. It could be that some readers of poetry imagine gloss and size to be a reliable indication of high-order art and craft; that such production values — in the print and paper sense — give magazines an exclusive right to excellence. These readers should take a look at PENNINE PLATFORM — a magazine brimful of very good poetry.

I remember the magazine when it was edited by Ken Smith and thought it good then. The current editor, Nicholas Bielby, has altered the format (marginally), has increased the number of pages and kept — mercifully — to the old price of £4.00 per copy.

The magazine has always published a mixture of well known and not so well known poets — known names such as Joan Sheridan Smith, Paul Groves, Mike Hoy, Edward Storey, etc., appear in this issue. I particularly liked Edward Storey's LETTER FROM THE ASYLUM — an imagined communication from John Clare to his sister; simple and moving (as Clare himself would have written it):

	Yet in our childhood we both felt
	the hours were never long enough.
	Fields were our pleasure and our school;
	you knew as many birds and flowers
	as I've been given credit for in all my work.

	It worries me to think that I was granted more
	than I deserved, while you took second-place,
	watching as I was doted on because
	my poetry achieved a curious fame.
	But, what of that, when all is said and done!
Gordon Scapen's PROPHET with its intriguing narrator, a prehistoric cave painter, is utterly convincing — and again simply written:
	I have visions,
	paint on cave walls
	truths that will overtake us.

	I saw the night air
	dance in the gleam
	of discovered fire.
There is considerable variety of style in these pages. Some pieces aren't so easily accessible. Lawrence James' A HOUSE THE HOUSE is one of them; accessibility not aided, as it happens, by it being found on page 33 and not, as per index, on page 25 (ho! ho!):
	a house the house home to a man the man one-time fisherman
	thinks to time still both sea — and the turn of river-tides
	leagues even to within a couple of ticks

	and look a castle on sands alchemized to full-length looking glass
	by a tide just gone the bay blue through the sky
A fascinating, lyrical seascape with a carefully judged absence of some conjunctions/articles, and a complete absence of punctuation. This is an effective/affective poem reflecting wonder and loss — it reminds me of work by Kilmpt.

Bielby, in his editorial, rightly suggests that poetry is essentially an interactive art. A serious reader of PENNINE PLATFORM will not regret his or her part in that partnership.

reviewer: Michael Bangerter.
Pennine Platform #56

PENNINE PLATFORM acknowledges the support of the Leeds Philosphical and Literary Society. The editorial begins

I have been asked, "What do editors look for in selecting poems?" Of course, I can only answer for myself. In the first place, I depend on my intuitive reactions. So, what are my intuitions based on? In general, intuitions are based on temperment and moral character, trained by education and reading. More specifically, you may infer my implicit criteria from the choices I make...
And it goes on in this vein for another 30 lines. Having read the magazine all through I find two poems I truly liked. The first OF COURSE IT GOES ON comes into the category, what did you do in the war Daddy? and the second, 31.12.2003 — yes that is the title — comes into the category how terrible are our young. Both are by John Gilham, a poet to look out for. In the poet's mini biog — yes it's one of those magazines — it says
John Gilham is a lapsed ferroequinologist, prefering cycling, poetry and pub crawls and lives in York.
Generally I think the Pennine crew could do with a bit more Pennine air.

reviewer: P.J. Precious.
Pennine Platform #57

PENNINE PLATFORM is a model magazine in terms of its concerns to remind us that the UK has a fine record of achievement in genres like regional and local history. It can give some pointers on nurturing home grown talent. It is stylishly presented and well promoted and deserves to have a wide readership.

The magazine contains an editorial, 48 poems and several short reviews. Artwork is by Nicholas Bielby. In his editorial Bielby says,

We read the poets of the past or our contemporaries and feel sparked off by something we read, or feel emulation, or simply feel, 'I could do my own version of that,' or 'I'd like to try that technique out for myself.' We read other poets, in part, to have our minds expanded about possibilities we could exploit for ourselves. We make things our own by making them over into our own language or in terms of our own experiences.
These views inspire us to follow the poems like a spider web. Some may seem light and insubstantial at first, but it is worth taking time with them and tracing the weave of the threads. PENINE PLATFORM gathers together some familiar voices, and some fresh ones. There are poems by Alan Dunnett — COFFIN, Ian Emberson — SUNDIAL and John Duffy — THE DYSLEXIC SEARCH FOR IAN MCMILLAN that stick to conventional forms, with results which are instructive to others seeking to preserve traditional poetry in pristine form. There are art-related poems, humorous poems, poems about relationships, reasons why we should be pleasant to each other, love-lives, loveless lives, and so on. (Terry Quinn's HOW MUCH DO I MISS YOU, Khalid Khan's A REPLY, Mary Maher's AMBITION, and others).

On the other hand there are plenty of instances of work that repays further attention: Chris Hardy's THE RIVER ACHERON is a neat piece of work where the persona and companion follow the river for miles, but where

	We do not try to reach the spring,
	high above, where the peaks are grey and burnt,
	where no one has ever lived,
	except to hide from their enemies.
Christopher Barnes' poems, from his series on the artist Francis Bacon, smartly rework the "poets on painters" theme: here's Bacon writing to a friend in DEAR ERICA BRAUSEN
	I've an inkling you see:— a tarbooshed he-man
	urging the almond hands of an imp
	or a Lord Spiritual in specs,
	doubling hands, screech owls
	tethered to the chrysolite of his golden throne.
D. A. Prince's CLOWN SCHOOL is one of the funniest poems in the book, but its denouement is one of seriousness:
	I can't do painted tears or make-believe.
	The custard pies, the foam, the jokes — on me.
David Duncombe's VISITING MAJOR CHEUNG is a wonderful evocation of what the tourist is permitted to see in China. A. W. Thomson has several poems to his credit and makes me curious as to what else he can do well. The nearest thing to deliberate light verse (as opposed to verse which strains for seriousness and falls a lot short of the mark) is Roger Caldwell's THE SAME DIFFERENCE. If I were pushed to say what the best thing in the book is, I'd probably plump for Michael W. Thomas' A BOY WALKS, which seems to me utterly convincing in its control.

Whenever one or two poems falls flat, another one or two, or more, spring up in a row to overwhelm the impression of blandness, with their startlingly inventive metaphors and, occasionally, brilliant turns of phrase.

reviewer: Patricia Prime.