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The Journal #9

There is no conventional cover to THE JOURNAL, and this functional packaging neatly reflects the particular style that Sam Smith has achieved in a well established magazine. Its editorial values comprise pleasing unfussiness and a determination to promote forward-looking poetry from across the world. The A4 format is particularly effective in allowing even the largest poems a proper space to inhabit.

Smith makes equally good use of the smaller pockets of space on each page, filling the magazine with a healthy balance of reviews and editorial matter. Poetry shines through however, and the choice for the opening page is witty and apposite:

	Give me the fist of word,
	the knuckle sandwich ...
	there's more to life than precious
	petals falling from the rose.
Bruce McRae's MANIFESTO is a confident plea for poetry that isn't nice, but which explores things that seeth. There is plenty of other poetry that seethes — as much as it pleases.

Most memorable is POETRY, BLOOD AND CYANIDE by Cyrus Mahan, who provides a panoramic view of repression in Iran, which is a fine combination of the chilling and the deadpan, underpinned by the fugue of three lines:

	I will fight you
	With a book of poetry
	And a necklace of cyanide.
While the necklace was used as the ultimate escape for opponents of regimes old and current, the poem details many other simple things which are denied at present: wearing a tie, or perfume; shaving a beard.

Sam Smith has always looked beyond our borders, and the international contributors bring much of interest to this edition of THE JOURNAL. Emily Wright, for example, recreates the spaces and hints at the myriad of subcultures across the U.S.A. in three connected pieces. NAZCO, particularly, mixes a kaleidoscope of imagery and self-doubt with a sharp and sometimes cynical depiction of popular culture:

				Chains and pills and
	dogs with lazy eyes and Phenobarbital and laughs from
	saints who love to exaggerate and I need glasses.
On numerous occasions, Smith devotes a page to one poet, creating some remarkably varied and intriguing digests of writers' work. This is particularly true of the work of writers like Giovanni Malito, whose four poems touch on various ironies, as well as writers who influenced him. It also true of the provocative and isiosyncratic trio of poems by Amy Jan Vrem. Each exudes mental turbulence, contextualized in CROCODILES AND TORNADOS, a series of visionary, but painful moments:
	Sanctuary, sanitarium?
	Which will cure the silence?
	The lizards lie waiting for the swallows
	Which today fly low.
THE JOURNAL eshews traditional forms, while accommodating many examples of form and style that are subtle, or semi-concealed. For example, SAN RAFAEL, by Gary Sloboda includes enough rhyme and assonance to surprise us when it is omitted, as in the final few lines:
	On dirty concrete

	and dead leaves we danced
	like widows with his broom.
The magazine's numerous reviewers cover a large quantity of publications with a pleasing mixture of positive commentary and incisiveness. That's very good value for £2.50.

reviewer: Will Daunt
The Journal #10

This Journal is produced in Britain and contains the work of poets from, for instance, the USA, Denmark, and Italy. There are sections containing book and magazine reviews.

A well produced A4 publication with 40 pages of poetry and reviews. The poems are varied and of quite a high standard. One by Idris Caffrey called LIGHT YEARS caught my eye. The language is simplistic yet effective. It is a poem that handles a difficult subject with clarity and precision:

	I asked if I could help
	but he sent me away to my room —
	he spends more time with my sister now
	and I've often heard her crying.
Anne Lewis-Smith also gives us a treat with her poem called 5:30 A.M. In this poem, daybreak is described:
	Spectral trees appear
	clear then gradually fade
	branches ghost away

	Web wheels hang listless
	fine woven strands glistening
	capturing moisture
KV Skene has written a series of poems on dogs and this is one called WHEN ONE DOG BARKS, ALL BARK:
	As if the moon
	(full and hunting
	her stubborn soul)
	pulls from field, woodlot,
	suburban backyard,
	a wild cry,
	a dog-song, strung
	throat to throat
	(dark, discordant
	with mongrel memory)
	already old
	as death — and the night
	screams aloud,
	alive — and a man-god
	shivers
	at the greed in it.
This is a very interesting journal containing poems of a high standard.

reviewer: Doreen King
The Journal #11

I like the look of this magazine. Its no-nonsense but attractive format and modest clear fonts, promoting a bevy of varied poems and reviews, promise a good read. Issue 11, in the main, did not disappoint. The lyricism of FLEURS and the dynamic description of a 'mystical parade' in RUTS (prose poems, translated by Louis E. Bourgeois from the French of Arthur Rambaud) are a delight. This from FLEURS:

Yellow gold pieces scattered over white corpse, mahogany pillows supporting emerald domes, bouquets of white satin and tender droplets of rubies surround the water rose.
A fine sonnet, THE VILLAGE, by R.L. Cook (who, sad to say, died before its publication) is another poem that has a rich, highly evocative language (reminiscent of Laurie Lee).
	First it's a picture postcard; nothing stirs;
	The street is doped with summer; drunken flowers,
	Heavy with sun, lean on the air; the firs
	Across the dappled field are still as towers
	Carved from green rock ...
I was irritated (rather) by Nigel Rushbrook's review of two poetry collections (or non-review), in which he takes a whole page, and a large one at that, to let us know he doesn't think much of today's poetry — with the exception of two or three contemporary poets. Even they don't please him entirely. He deplores the amount of poetry being written and published. He accuses writers of administering a form of self therapy when they versify (personally I would recommend a sip from the cup that cheers). Mr Rushbrook has failed to acknowledge that ever since books were made easier to print (first quarter 19C), people have been publishing and self publishing an abundance of poetry. It is only by poetry being in abundance that the true poets will emerge. It is good that many people write. I wish more of them did: my postman: the chaps who deliver my papers and milk: the Laird (I live in Scotland) — what conversations we could have (what larks?)! No, if there was not this abundance I doubt whether Mr Rushbrook would be reviewing anywhere.

I would have much preferred it if this particular reviewer had done the job he was asked to do and reviewed with the respect such collections deserve. He admits the poetry in these books is not bad poetry; and even if it were, it would no doubt have been written with sincerity and not merely to make a quick buck. This article ought not have been in the 'review' section.

Again I was struck with the intensely perceptive economy of Jacqueline Karp's poetry (two poems from SUDDEN MARASCHINOS which I reviewed earlier this year). SWEDISH ARCHAEOLOGY:

  
	Then out of the clay 
	the stark dirge shone: 
	En dag ar so lang.
	A day is so long, 
	my own old tongue 
	stripped to the bone.
The poems are followed by Sam Smith conducting an absorbing interview with the poet. Ms Karp talks fluently of her linguistic eclecticism and immense enthusiasm for poetry.

As in most magazines there are poems that I liked a lot, and others that left me less than fired-up. I was, though, glad of all of them!

reviewer: Michael Bangerter