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Moonstone #89 | |
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Moonstone is a modestly produced, pamphlet style magazine dedicated exclusively to poetry. And there are certainly some enjoyable poems here like THOUGH I SHOULDER THIS RAIN by John Raubenheimer: Though I shoulder this rain like a pack I know a part of me will always be In Johannesburg Transvaal, in Bellevue, Near the vagrant root of a flowering tree. I know that part of me will always be Where purple jacarandas wash over the street With my brother feeding the pigeons, who with fencing wings Strut and bobble about his sandalled feet...Raubenheimer's nostalgia for life in South Africa sails close to, but ultimately just avoids sentimentality. For me his poem is made all the more interesting by the nagging question which hangs unavoidably over it: but what about Apartheid? Is this just a poem about being homesick? We can all relate to that. Or is it also on some level an attempt by Raubenheimer to romanticise the old South Africa? Even if it's the latter though the advocates of PC poetry will no doubt vociferously object it would in no way invalidate his poem. Under the worst regime, there are normal lives to be lived, everyday pleasures to be had. And when change comes, as change must, people (such as the white South Africans or, a little closer to home, the Anglo-Irish) left feeling displaced. Although there are a few familiar names here, such as Giovanni Malito, Richard Bonfield & Geoff Stevens, most of the poets in this issue were not previously known to me. Of the poets discovered here I most enjoyed the work of Denise Margaret Hargrave, although in both DARK MOON and MIDWINTER she closes on rather weak notes: MIDWINTER Midwinter ... when the eternal nights devour the pallid days, and bright holly berries flash scarlet like rubies in the snow. Midwinter ... when jet feathered ravens perch silhouetted black against a cold white sky, waiting in the pale time of standstill. Midwinter ... when mistletoe glistens milky white as moonbeams, and evergreens glitter spangled silver with frost in the wood. Midwinter ... when sage tellers of tales gather round the Yule log to charm the sun back home, time now to turn the wheel of the year.I really like the first three stanzas, although I'd question her use in stanza two of "waiting in the pale time of standstill". Would it not have been better to end the stanza with the previous line; the phrase "cold white sky" being very striking indeed? It is the last stanza though that is for me most problematic. I like the line "to charm the sun back home", but apart from that it seems to me to be rather flabby. Similarly in DARK MOON she begins well: Dark, dark, dark ... into the dark wanes the moon, her crescent dissolving in an ocean of stars.but the last line without death, no rebirthshould surely have been edited out, the previous line without night, no bright daymaking for a much better ending. That said, Hargrave is clearly a poet with some potential. And in many ways her poems are typical of the sort of work Moonstone likes to publish. There is a vaguely New Age feeling about some of the work here, although nothing too esoteric. Several of the poems such as Geoff Stevens' DEF LEPPARDS are in the nostalgic English pastoral tradition; the city appearing only occasionally as an amorphous monster hell-bent on destroying natural habitats. Stevens' poem begins with the lines There is nothing as quiet as a vanished lark, but it is a quietness you cannot experience if you do not have the recollection...and ends with a question aimed obviously at city slickers everywhere: You cannot understand, but how would it be if I told you to turn off your walkman for ever?If Moonstone has a guiding spirit it is probably that of Edward Thomas with, perhaps, a little help from Ted Hughes. | ||
| reviewer: Kevin Higgins | ||
| Moonstone #90 | ||
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The very first poem SPURN by Geoff Stevens caught my attention with some good descriptive poetry and powerful images: Spurn point sand spits its phlegmed head into the North Sea, a pied, black on white lighthouse buttoning its tongueand later in his poem BURREN there were some more interesting and unusual images a demi-pomegranate sun, strontium blushed limestone and groove-etched pavement of burnished copper. In Ken Campion's FIRE there were also some dazzling images. The first lines of this fine poem: She came across the land in an awkward stutter Head down, pale arms turned outward at the elbow. Curling a foot tightly around a calf She pirouetted. Growing taller, straighter. DazzlingI like the two typically short and charming pieces by Denise Margaret Hargraves DRAGONFLY and BETWEEN THE APPLE TREES also the rondel X MARKS THE SPOT by Philip Burton, a form not seen often today which has an attractive sound. Altogether I found Moonstone to be a very enjoyable collection and there were many other poems I enjoyed. The only one that jarred for me personally was THE GREAT STONE OF FOURSTONES by Steve Sneyd. The complete absence of punctuation did nothing for my understanding and indeed it almost caused me miss what, with perseverance, I perceived to be some quite impressive images in this rather surreal creation. Others, perhaps more enlightened, may find it a refreshing piece. The final poem POST-SCRIPT by Patrick James is about letters written after his father's death to be consigned to the open hearth, today I write my final letter to my fatherand this poem provides a fitting and touching end to a most worthwhile collection. | ||
| reviewer: Ron Woollard | ||
| Moonstone #91 | ||
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Describing itself as a "non-profit making" quarterly, MOONSTONE welcomes "Pantheistic/ecological contributions (previously unpublished)" for consideration. Having survived into its 24th year, this little journal has clearly established a loyal following in this somewhat specific field. #91 includes some familiar names such as John Light, who designed the effective cover, Steve Sneyd and Geoff Stevens. I enjoyed the latter's TWITCHING, a compact gem of a poem which is a single, tightly controlled, sentence. As is to be expected given MOONSTONE'S editorial policy, there is an preference for nature poetry, though not of the chocolate-box sort, but often with a good eye for colour and detail. John Younger thoughtfully portrays the death of a bird in DEAD STOP, and there is a refreshing bite to COUNTRY POETS by Ken Chapman: Squatting on tree roots they smile at spiders, glory in the disciplined industry of ants Oh, that we were like that, PippaOther poems which appealed to me were Dennis Leckey's BALLETIC HEDGEHOG, a sensitive description of a hedgehog caught in car headlights, and Richard Bonfield's effective yet simply worded ELGAR'S ENGLAND. Steve Sneyd's two poems provide a more challenging contrast, and I particularly liked his IN THE FINE PRINT THERE WERE THREE OF HER. The journal is neatly produced, but I found the business pages at the beginning and end cramped and difficult to read. I had to hunt to find the subscription details and the adverts for other publications would have been more effective if given more space. Such technical criticisms aside, this is an interesting read. | ||
| reviewer: Pauline Kirk | ||
| Moonstone #92 | ||
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The thing about little poetry magazines is to "keep on keeping on" according to my old school motto with the proviso that you constantly afford a platform for those who need it, acting as a small cog in the machinery of self-sacrificing editors working with the Muse to keep her environment alive everywhere, not in the mode of capitalist publishers which treat her as a slave working for profit by its single-minded taskmasters.
I did not see a lot to enthuse on in this number but Joy Adams has a likeable couple of poems THE OTHER SIDE OF SILENCE and PROMISE, the latter creating a beneficial tension for the reader with A yellow yawn of a day, with an opulence of heat that saturates the laden, viscous air. Our minds like amber, stilled, in a cask, resinous and rich. | ||
| reviewer: Eric Ratcliffe |