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Songs of Innocence (And Experience) #5

This 2004 collection of nearly 200 pages of poetry and prose, with a few reviews, is well served by the black and white drawings of the illustrator D.Crockett.

Much of the content is in traditional literary style. The statement of purpose tells us the journal

is committed to providing an artistic forum for quality fiction, essays and verse which celebrate the nobler, more spiritual aspects of Man, the World. and their Creator.
Format, print type and the sorting of poems and articles to get a balance is good; although book reviews with title, author and date only do not guide readers to publishers should they wish to purchase. The self-luxuriating heading for these as
THE ORACLE. Reviews from the mouth of the Delphic Apollo — as divined by his favourite child — the Prophet: Michael M. Pendragon
can be understood as a romanticism, but rather subtracts credence from serious reviewing. Publishers on the whole like to feel their books are approached in a business-like manner (and they are, but this heading does not help.) There should always be a link between reader and publisher if the latter is not well known. However the editor provides addresses for the two magazines reviewed — ImageNation and Romantics Quarterly.

The articles appear more interesting than the poems, and divide into Fiction and Essays. Ian Deal's essay AN ERA OF TRUTH raises questions of eternal truths of states of consciousness and what science has done to help us understand reality, the cosmos &c, although there is no universal belief in the Aquarian Age. Ian tells us that

the empirical approach, upon which the scientific method is based, can only examine the concrete phenomena . . .
but theory and experiment are interchangeable in order. Undeniably professional scientists deal with the concrete. However, should they wish they could extend activities to investigating the paranormal but so far the big guns have shied off this controversial subject head-on. We can hope that advances in understanding ourselves and the cosmos must in time embrace genuine aspects of the paranormal, if only that science does not stand still and that discovery is a watchword. The danger may be that commercial pressures tend to exclude experiments wih no obvious practical outcome.

I enjoyed the historical fiction AS THE SPIRIT LEADS, of editor Pendragon. Though somewhat drawn out it is the confessional of one of those who sailed to the New World a bit later than the original voyagers who reached it in 1692. Jon Lawson was accompanied by his parents and aunt Elvina, landing in 1689. Tormented between religious fervour and fleshly passion for his aunt, and in the atmosphere of Salem witch hunting, he feels he should poison her to save his soul from what he sees as her witchery, prompted by a God-voice. Elvina's death plays on his mind to the extent that he comes to believe that the voices were those of imps from hell, and that he himself was the devil's pawn. Hence the confession.

LISTEN TO THE TREES by Sue Parman is fiction, set in wintry Wales, a very strange Wales where influences of trees predominate in the history of the community. Singing breaks out (I thought sometimes over-technically described for the reader's comfort):

. . . Emyr drew a deep breath, and wondered if some day he would open his mouth and there would be no air to breathe. Beside him, he heard Seton Jones do the same, and they burst forth with an ascending tonic, changed to a seamless subdominant and dominant. Seton Jones taking the first note, Emyr sliding to a third above him . . .
After reading through several times, I am convinced that there are manifold loose ends, but these flaws are redeemed in the telling of the story. The author gets away with this odd-bod affair. Emyr is seemingly a porter at Bwlch station, in the days of Queen Victoria, but is actually the local headmaster, present to escort the Englishman Henry Middleton-Smythe, a nephew of a Mrs Crickhowe, who has been away for 40 years. Crikhowe and Jones the blacksmith are in the carriage which collects him. There are memories of him murdering a tree in her parlour, about which the house was constructed. It's a queer tale which has to be read and cannot be paraphrased. There are attractive interludes such as Mrs C talking to her nephew:
There is no porter in Bwlch, dear, and no servants. We all have the same job. We sing to the trees and Emyr is our song shepherd.
It turns out also that there are only nine people left in this village, which raises the point of zero population for any headmaster's school. When Smythe leaves he takes Emyr with him as servant. The latter wants to use his leave to revisit Bwlch but is told it does not exist. Zany but delightful reading.

It is not possible to adequately comment on all the other articles, they are all readable, some a little too simplistic, others take the reader with them, engagingly, until the end.

Of the poetry, on the negative side, Rossmé Taylor provides three SONNETS FOM THE ANTIQUE, two of 16 lines and one of 17. I thought the editor might have disallowed the title. Jane Stuart's A YEAR'S DREAM COMES TRUE has a subtitle (Sestina) when it is only a sestet of six lines. The other announced fixed form is the successful RONDEL by Phillip Ellis. YOU REMEMBER LAKE WINDEMERE? by Richard Alan Bunch is mis-spelled. More positively VISITING THE ANASAZI RUINS by Frederick Zydec was a reminder that we in the UK should know more about the prehistory of the native American Indian:

	They were the stargazers and architects 
	of antiquity. These mud and stone castles
	mounted in the mouth of this enormous
	cave were once the centre of a universe
	that earned its living next door to ours
Lyn Lifshin's NIGHTS WHEN IT WAS TOO HOT TO STAY IN THE APARTMENT is a brightly imaged piece, from the point of view of young sisters who find themselves driven to their grandmother's. They camp out on the lawn:
	. . .  Spirea and 
	yellow roses circled the earth under
	stars. A silver apple moon ... 
			...  We          
	wanted the stars on our skin, the
	small green apples to hang over
	the blanket to protect us from bats.
In NORWEGIAN WATERFALL, Lynn Veach Sadler brings in sprites, trolls, goblns and fairies as daytime turns to twilight in her imaginative piece:
	At twight, evening, night,
	mist masses from the marshes        
	musk of bear and troll decants
UK poets who send contributions should prepare for a long wait for a decision. This is an annual and takes time to assemble. I will say this — it is a refreshing effort shorn of the pessimism, distasteful sexual references, vulgarity and general social materialism which are notes of a lot of today's small press literature. Pamela Constantine of the UK, versed in soul awareness and advancement of the spiritual, gives poetic support with several poems and a short essay POET'S WORLD: We no longer look for that which is beyond reason or logic. So to us now, the universe we term 'material' is just a matter of physical atoms, and we ourselves, in this dimmed perception, are finite husks to be scattered by the winter wind. Unfortunately this dimmed perception will remain dim for a long time until the matter of physical atoms is resolved into a new reality by scientific advancements. So, philosophically, this light-filtering annual is well worth turning to if it evades the dangers of stepping off the path into journalistic sensationalism or dark and negative fiction.

reviewer: Eric Ratcliffe.