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Acumen #49 | |
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I don't know how many poetry magazines there are in current existence in this country, or these countries, seeing that they both spring up like mushrooms after rain and, conversely, melt as snow in sunshine, but let's say somewhere around the 250 mark, Acumen is one of the stayers, and I think it would reckon itself to be amongst the more notable ones. It has certainly smartened itself up considerably over the years (and this is not a negligible asset), is a convenient if substantial size (this number has 120pp and a semi-stiff glossy pictorial cover), is immaculately printed and on quality paper: a pleasure to handle. The reader is perhaps expecting that after this encomium about relative inessentials there will be some reservations about the quality of the contents but I should first list briefly what these are: in the present number, somewhat over 40 poems; articles on a variety of subjects ranging from the life of Baudelaire to the demise of the Muse; reviews of various lengths depending (I surmise) on the putative importance of the poet under review, e.g. four pages on the complete Lowell, a paragraph on lesser lights (or unknown lights), plus a final two-side round-up from the magazine's long-standing reviews editor, Glyn Pursglove. There is also a correspondence section, largely devoted to a nitpicking exchange of letters concerning a previously-printed translation by Charles Hobday of a Goethe poem, but which ends with a letter by Avril Bruten (Oxford) reporting a series of memories about the late Kathleen Raine and leading into an excruciating poem in memory of a speech day long ago at which Raine spoke: Well, how our Grammar could not let you speak As you meant to speak as you spoke...My acquaintance with Acumen is quite a long one. and I have in the past read it with pleasure and profit; but my disappointment with this particular number is beginning to show and had better be confessed and illustrated. I find too many of the poems flawed in one way or another; too much prosaism; for instance: FROM GENERATION TO GENERATION (W.D. Jackson) The older one gets, the more one wonders how We might have done things better.One should not, of course, expect every poem to burst onto the scene with a theatrical gesture, but Jackson's poem never catches fire. John Mole's sonnet UPRIGHT is much more linguistically alert: My father's father played the bones With a fine unmusical frenzyTony Turner's ear lets him down in the third line (inevitably repeated) of his villanelle THE DEATH OF DR. DAVID KELLY: A learned judge has said that this is true: Alone he took his life, put out his light And we heard the evidence too...The rest of the poem hasn't much to recommend it either, e.g. He lost his self-esteem, his bleakness grewand Thrown to the wolves. His expert life seemed through.Crude stuff; one doesn't know precisely who or what is supposed to be on the receiving end of this satire. I have already quoted from the poem by Avril Bruten about Kathleen Raine which follows her reminiscence which contains such gems as K.R. You become a poet by being a poetand a little more of SPEECH DAY 1956 seems in order to illustrate the magazine's poetry offerings at their worst: While, outside, the throat-click and choke Of trams tramping down sewer-flood grime, Bubble-gum, Spanish Wood we chomped and The spat-out welk-bones [sic] from Tubby Isaac's stall...I was expecting a few fireworks from Alison Chisholm's LEDA'S LEARNING, a monologue based on the Yeats poem, but again felt let down: I prayed it was a nightmare: but I knew those strange marks where his bill secured my neck, the feathers in my hair, the pain.. .the pain... were real.No, the dots aren't going to induce me to do the work the poem should be doing it cops out at the critical point, surely. Dannie Abse's DOODLES FROM MY WORKBOOK 2: surely something here, I anticipated: To bury the hatchet is, unfortunately, a unilateral act. Shopping nowadays at Christmas sometimes I think Scrooge was ahead of his time. We are never bored when we are in the company of an enemy.I trust Abse made something worthwhile out of what looks like irredeemably trivial material. A few poems, e.g. John Mole's sonnets, save the day somewhat, as does Linda Saunders, in long, loping lines i.m. Barry MacSweeney. Paul Groves, in FOUR CORNERS OF THE CIRCLE, writes in ingenious seasonal terms about growing up and growing old: Shoots burst forth, buds harden in the kindergarten. There are snowdrop faces. Crocuses learn to tie laces.But I really wasn't very impressed by many of the poems. A review by Christopher J.P. Smith asks a pertinent question when it refers to ...a criticism I have recently and frequently heard levelled at much British poetry have we really anything to say?Only a few poems here try to engage with something beyond the narrow confines of the self and its little world. Does A.J. Cartmel-Crossley's CELEBRITY SONG hit something firmly on the head that is asking for it (and heaven knows so much out there is asking for it these days)? Trumpeting their virtues the politicians lie Before whatever judges their silver pieces buy. Newsreaders spout out platitudes we all hold dear...If you are going to attack such targets, you had better do it less awkwardly and naively. Interspersing clusters of poems are articles, mostly brief, on a variety of subjects mostly to do with poetry (though Anna Adams chooses to write a review, in evocative prose, of an R.A. exhibition ILLUMINATING THE RENAISSANCE). I was sorry to learn from James Aitchison that the muse is dead, having tried to celebrate her continued life and vigour in poems of my own. But Aitchison's attempt at defining the elusive creature puts his thinking on a different wavelength from mine, and no wonder I persist in pursuing her: ...the muse could have been ...a set of neural networks that were encoded for an aspect of self and identity but were difficult to activate because the natural domain of that set of networks was the nonconscious mind.Myself, I think I prefer Graves on the subject. Elsewhere, Geoffrey Godbert writes interestingly about Baudelaire's long relationship with his grande horizontal Apollonie Sabatier, and about many another writer and horizontal of the period (a wonder they found time and energy to get anything on paper) but I shall not re-read LES FLEURS DU MAL with particularly renewed insight into the poetry (which is my perennial problem with biography and history). And the reviews? Of the two matters with which reviews should concern themselves, telling you what is the subject matter and scope of the poetry, and suggesting what's good and bad about it and whether it's worth reading, that is description and evaluation, these reviews on the whole are stronger on the former than on the latter. If you are hoping, from the longest review here, by Fred Beake on the new collected Lowell, to discover why you should invest in its round 40 quids'worth and 1186pp and why the prolific poet is worth reading at all, you might be disappointed. What makes Lowell interesting is his constant shifts of direction.The question is, does he shift anywhere worthwhile? Vague value words better, best, heights abound in the incidental comparisons which pervade this long review, virtually an article, but the review does little to persuade me to tackle Lowell again, and I suspect from the undercurrent of doubt that Beake himself isn't persuaded that such a long journey is necessary, though he does not tell me why. That Lowell ...wrestled with his craft as few do todayand has "breadth", is all very well: I'd like to know with what success his reviewer thinks this is the case. To be told, by Christopher J.P. Smith, that Rose Flint in NECKYIA .. .reinforces the sense of a life moving perpetually into the changeable, evoking the thrown-into-the-worldness of our times the acceleration towards the unknown,however awkward the English here, is to be told something helpful (and Smith, like all the other reviewers indeed, does helpfully support his judgements with copious illustration). A substantial magazine, then, seriously edited and compiled by the long-term editor, Patricia Oxley , and as well worth reading as it was to review. No doubt the quality of the individual numbers of the magazine varies, and perhaps this one does not show it at its best. But lively, varied and serious, it has to be judged. I would have preferred more of a cutting edge to its contents all round, and it would need an article to explain what I mean by that; but perhaps a definition is implicit in the contents of this review. | ||
| reviewer: Eddie Wainwright. |